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CHAOS by Fur3ver CHAOS by Fur3ver
This is the finished piece~ It's of Valkeri, my pokemon character, later on in my Black 2 nuzlocke. She looks quite different, eh? Speaking of, I should probably upload the 4 pages I have already finished
The original title was 'Discord', but I will save that for something much more special <3 (btw, no pony reference if your wondering :T)
I am so proud of this
This is like the best thing I've ever done
Critiques are highly appreciated :,D
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this is....AMG YOU ARE SO AMAZING WIFEY!!!! so i shall flood you with compliments and then give you some helpful tips~
-your highlights and shading!!! amg so wonderful!!! just watch out and make sure you have a consistent light source, also remember that highlights add shape so use them to make something look 3D, and play with the placement so you can figure out how to best do that ^^
-the posing~ wow you are getting so much better at that X3 and the anatomy looks great!!! of course there is room to improve but still, this is wonderful!!
-the outfit is complex and well drawn i loooove it!! and her hair~ how you coloured that!!! amg amg i also love her eye X3
-the background is ok~ i like how it doesn't take away from the focal but it doesn't really add to it either so just work on that ^^ find a balance so the background is interesting but not overpowering~ again this is lovely work and probably one of your best thus far so keep it up!!! love it dear~ =3=
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striderImpersonator Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome!
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:iconfur3ver:
Fur3ver Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you <3
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striderImpersonator Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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jiskii Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Omg this is your best work yet ;o;
I really love this. Like the paintery like stile and shizzle.
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You did great!!!
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Fur3ver Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thankies, yeah I'm pretty sure it is ;v;
Thanks so much again >u<
do you have any advice for doing anything better?
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jiskii Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Maybe dont blur the lineart but remove it completely?
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:iconfur3ver:
Fur3ver Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It would look kind of....gross like that |D I kinda did that on purpose for the effect derp
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Jazznote Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing Steam. *-*
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Fur3ver Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehehe, thanks so much :,3
I'm glad you like it~ ...I should post the pages of my nuzlocke derp...
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BabaKinkin Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
also, i hate how should anyone use the word discord, tey have to have a disclaimer that it is not in fact related to ponies.
that.
drives me nuts.
because it's such a gooo word and i feeel like it's ruined now ohgod im ranting i'lll stop now srrty bai
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Fur3ver Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It also annoys me, my gosh. :T This is one of the reasons I dislike ponies. I actually used to like 'em, but it's kind of just ruined for me now... ugh
No it's okay xD You can rant all you want
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BabaKinkin Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
wohwihwoahwoahyooooo
immma put alll this in bulllet points, otherwise it's gonnna be a big 'ol messs
-i love those colours holy crap. i was wonderin' before of blie went with orange and yelllow aPPARENTLY IT DOES
-the shading on the hair, jug woowowowo, that's the kinda shadin' i shoot for, but alas, immma terrrible aim~ rly tho, hiw the helll do you nake it do that
-i think maybe because the body seeems to be lesss chibi than you usually draw, you could try making thevface a bit lesss chibi??? just by elongating the face, making it lesss round, though you could stilll get away with not drawing a nose( i am hideously aware of how offfputttibg the concept of having to draw a nose can be)
-i like the shading on the skin, particularly how it has orange tones around the highlights, though i think you neeed to be careful with the highlights and use them sparingly, and maybemake 'em more mattt loooking. ain't no one got skin dat shiny, yo~
- an' ve careful wih the anatomy thar, though i think everyone knows how irking that can be, bleh~ that arm that loooks a bit out of plce, i think if the forearm was angled lower, and the hand angled towards the leg???
-but omg i can't get over that hair asdfghkkl-
and i hope this helps and isn' a complete load of misleading codswalllop eeeeee~
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Fur3ver Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
holy flip
so long
okay this will take forever to reply to but
I CAN DO IT
:bulletred: Thank you, I don't even know what else to say to this ;A;
:bulletorange: Idk how I even did that. I would try to make a tutorial and like explain it, for ya, I would be willing to do that, just after Christmas ;u;
:bulletyellow: Yes, I know, the face kinda looks out of place because the rest of the body. Can't do anything about that now, it's all on one layer xD
:bulletgreen: Yes, no one has skin that shiny. It wasn't originally like that, though. Since the art style was inspired by one of my favorite artists and they make their stuff all shiny I just had to add that as well~
:bulletblue: Anatomy is still shaky for me, blergh. Unfortunately I wasn't paying much attention to it since I was paying attention to other stuff. ;n; I will keep that in mind though
:bulletpurple: Well thanks, to be honest I'm pretty proud of the hair myself x,D
well thank you for all the advice and stuff ;w;
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BabaKinkin Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
ehhehe,
-ooo yay i love tutorialsss C:
-woah, holy crap how do you do alll that on one layer asghjkl-
-ohhohhhh, right, i thought it might have beeen a style thing, wasn' sure though~
-ahah, oh i getcha, one of them acidental things that you don't expect to turn into a fulll pic but do? that's why i'lll never be goood at anatomy. i can't plan anything, hehe
-ee no probz, bro C: i liek helpin' if i can ^^
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Fur3ver Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:bulletred: Ehehe, I will do that when I have the time then c:
:bulletorange: Idk man. Well, at first I did lineart on a different layer then flat coloring on the lower thingamagig and then I merged it down. But besides that, it's all on one layer!
:bulletyellow: Ye, ye. I should have mentioned that in the description.
:bulletgreen: Yeah, I didn't really expect it to turn into one of the best pictures I've ever done, I was just testing some stuff on Sai. @w@
:bulletblue: Hehehe, thanks again~ ...Idk what to say now lol..
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RedeyedDragoness Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
wow, looks good
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Fur3ver Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, but what else? Do you have a personal opinion, or a favorite thing about it~?
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RedeyedDragoness Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
it looks so very pretty to me
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:iconfur3ver:
Fur3ver Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is not exact;y what I was hoping for, derp...
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RedeyedDragoness Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i got to other video games for Christmas
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:iconfur3ver:
Fur3ver Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What were they?
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RedeyedDragoness Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
beyblade metal fusion, and shin megami tensei devil survivor
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:iconfur3ver:
Fur3ver Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehe...I'm still so excited of what I got <333
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