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Sweet Kream cover 1 by Fur3ver Sweet Kream cover 1 by Fur3ver
Omg
I am in love with Sai
Matti did two full drawings with backgrounds and everything? Impossibirru!
But anyways, I guess this is my way of saying sorry for all the sketches and stuff
chapter 1: [link]
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let me list off all the wonderful things here:
-the pose. nice job~ it looks natural and it is an easy pose to get a full view of the character with so i give you cookies for that X3
-next is the detail, since this is not your character you had to draw him fairly accurate so people would know who he is. I think you did great~ the colours, clothes, other minor details are well done and this is obviously Rin.
-the background. I love it mainly because it does not take focus off the focal, which is Rin.

now here are the things I think you could do better with:
-now since this is a cover you should put the title of the story and the name of the author.
-second is the fire, the only thing here is that you should have given it a glow since it looks a little flat.
-the background does not look all that realistic, but more work with backgrounds will help with that so just work more at it.

that is all i really have to say~ the bird and the blood look great~ so just work on the things i said X3 and great job :3
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:iconredeyeddragoness:
RedeyedDragoness Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Wow.
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:iconfur3ver:
Fur3ver Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you??
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:iconredeyeddragoness:
RedeyedDragoness Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Why questioning it
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:iconfur3ver:
Fur3ver Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well
'wow' isn't very descriptive
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:iconredeyeddragoness:
RedeyedDragoness Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
It makes me think of Rin!!!
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:iconfur3ver:
Fur3ver Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it IS Rin XD
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:iconredeyeddragoness:
RedeyedDragoness Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
So cool that it is Rin :)
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Fur3ver Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yup XD
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