MY GOSH PUNKY WILL YOU EVER STOP DRAWING DEPRESSING STUFF. sorrysorrysorry but anyways this is for the activity check I'm aliiiive and so is Tanaka and Aoi and Terasu so yeeeeey edit: I forgot to add a warning derp
Since you wanted a critique, here we go! Ok first of all, where did the pupils go? Maybe draw Tanaka looking up, or eyes closed tightly with pain? That paw looks really small, maybe you should of hidden it under the wing. Also the second tail (the chopped off one) makes it look like Tanakas butt crack is showing. Maybe you should of bent it the other way instead of wrapping it around the body.
Enough about the body parts, now the shading. There is too much reflected light (the red), unless its a red light. If it is actually a red light then everything should have a red tint. You did ok with finding the light source (i think its the top right corner) but its still not very clear. I see no diffused light or direct light ether.
Work on that. c: For vision i will give you 4 stars because you did great with the pose and finding the light source. For originality, meh ive seen many bleeding animals. So a 3 Technique: 4.5 because i really like how you did the blood. And Impact 5 c: